Proof read my Imagery Poem?
I had to write an Imagery poem for english today, but I wasn’t in school because of a field trip. Is the the right way to write an Imagery Poem? How can I improve it? Thanks in advance 
Remember just a few years ago, when you could
watch the spiraling, oak tree leaves fall and the
soft tug of the current in the mossy water?
Hearing the duck’s sunrise wake-up call
and the occasional ore hitting the water.
Never a motor. Rarely a yell.
Remember the breeze, the lanky seagrass
brushing against another, creating a symphony of tranquility.
The great egret perched proudly in the middle,
modeling its pure feathers to whoever watched
And the breathtaking blend of sherbet in the sky
Never a cloud, always a distraction.
great work!
Goldfinch Feeder
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bird perch “SPIRAL ROPE BUNGEE SMALL” $15 value $5.95 |
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TABLETOP BIRD PLAYGYM/PLAYSTAND, SPIRAL STEPS, TOY HANGERS $35.00 |
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bird perch “SPIRAL ROPE BUNGEE SMALL” $15 value $6.95 |
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The 2006-2011 World Outlook for Prepared, Frozen, Plain Cod, Cusk, Haddock, Hake, Perch, Pollock, and Whiting Fish Fillets and Steaks $795.00 WHAT IS LATENT DEMAND AND THE P.I.E.?The concept of latent demand is rather subtle. The term latent typically refers to something that is dormant, not observable, or not yet realized. Demand is the notion of an economic quantity that a target population or market requires under different assumptions of price, quality, and distribution, among other factors. Latent demand, therefore, is commonly def… |
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The 2006-2011 World Outlook for Prepared Frozen Cod, Cusk, Haddock, Hake, Perch, Pollock, and Whiting Fish Forms Excluding Fillets, Steaks, Sticks, and Portions $795.00 WHAT IS LATENT DEMAND AND THE P.I.E.?The concept of latent demand is rather subtle. The term latent typically refers to something that is dormant, not observable, or not yet realized. Demand is the notion of an economic quantity that a target population or market requires under different assumptions of price, quality, and distribution, among other factors. Latent demand, therefore, is commonly def… |
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Jungle Talk Pet Products BJNP84007 Edible Perch Split Branch Large $17.03 3 in 1 100 Edible Perches 3 functions Perch Chew Treat. Most popular perch shapes in natural wood looks. Helps keep beak and nails trim and healthy. Drives repeat purchases in the category vs. other permanent cage accessories. Branch available in spiral. |
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Jungle Talk Pet Products BJNP84006 Edible Perch Split Branch Small $18.27 3 in 1 100 Edible Perches 3 functions Perch Chew Treat. Mostt popular perch shapes in natural wood looks. Helps keep beak and nails trim and healthy. Drives repeat purchases in the category vs. other permanent cage accessories. Branch available in spiral. |
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17 Inch Copper Spiral Sunflower Feeder $40.42 17 in. Copper Mixed Seed Spiral Feeder. Consumers birds LOVE patented BirdQuest Spiral Feeders More ports means more birds. Birds love to Run The Spiral instead of flying to another perch. Spiral allows cardinals grosbeaks and other desirable large songbirds to feed. With normal perch tube feeders these birds have difficulty feeding without a seed tray. Lifetime warranty on workmanship and normal wear and tear. Aluminum and stainless steel parts. Squirrelproof patented locking lid just twist and lock those pesky varmints out. Easy to clean twist and clean (patent pending) easyclean bottom comes completely off for easy cleaning. No screws to mess with. Easy to hang looped wire hanging cable included (150 lb test) and attached. Holds cap so you don t have to wonder where you put it. Feeders come completely assembled (in beautiful open view box.) Take out of the box hang in your yard and watch how fast the birds are attracted to the patented Spiral Perch. |
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8.5 Inch Mini Spiral Peanut Feeder Silver $30.55 Mini Spiral Peanut Feeder Silver 8.5 in. Consumers birds LOVE patented BirdQuest Spiral Feeders More ports means more birds. Birds love to Run The Spiral instead of flying to another perch. Spiral allows cardinals grosbeaks and other desirable large songbirds to feed. With normal perch tube feeders these birds have difficulty feeding without a seed tray. Lifetime warranty on workmanship and normal wear and tear. Aluminum and stainless steel parts. Squirrelproof patented locking lid just twist and lock those pesky varmints out. Easy to clean twist and clean (patent pending) easyclean bottom comes completely off for easy cleaning. No screws to mess with. Easy to hang looped wire hanging cable included (150 lb test) and attached. Holds cap so you don t have to wonder where you put it. Feeders come completely assembled (in beautiful open view box.) Take out of the box hang in your yard and watch how fast the birds are attracted to the patented Spiral Perch. |
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18 Inch Super Spiral Sunflower Feeder $45.44 18 in. Super Spiral Sunflower Feeder. Consumers birds LOVE patented BirdQuest Spiral Feeders More ports means more birds. Birds love to Run The Spiral instead of flying to another perch. Spiral allows cardinals grosbeaks and other desirable large songbirds to feed. With normal perch tube feeders these birds have difficulty feeding without a seed tray. Lifetime warranty on workmanship and normal wear and tear. Aluminum and stainless steel parts. Squirrelproof patented locking lid just twist and lock those pesky varmints out. Easy to clean twist and clean (patent pending) easyclean bottom comes completely off for easy cleaning. No screws to mess with. Easy to hang looped wire hanging cable included (150 lb test) and attached. Holds cap so you don t have to wonder where you put it. Feeders come completely assembled (in beautiful open view box.) Take out of the box hang in your yard and watch how fast the birds are attracted to the patented Spiral Perch. |
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17 Inch Elegant Spiral Seed Feeder Black $37.12 Elegant 17 in Black Spiral Seed Feeder. Consumers birds LOVE patented BirdQuest Spiral Feeders More ports means more birds. Birds love to Run The Spiral instead of flying to another perch. Spiral allows cardinals grosbeaks and other desirable large songbirds to feed. With normal perch tube feeders these birds have difficulty feeding without a seed tray. Lifetime warranty on workmanship and normal wear and tear. Aluminum and stainless steel parts. Squirrelproof patented locking lid just twist and lock those pesky varmints out. Easy to clean twist and clean (patent pending) easyclean bottom comes completely off for easy cleaning. No screws to mess with. Easy to hang looped wire hanging cable included (150 lb test) and attached. Holds cap so you don t have to wonder where you put it. Feeders come completely assembled (in beautiful open view box.) Take out of the box hang in your yard and watch how fast the birds are attracted to the patented Spiral Perch. |
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17 Inch Green Spiral Sunflower Feeder $37.12 17 in. Green Mixed Seed Spiral Feeder. Consumers birds LOVE patented BirdQuest Spiral Feeders More ports means more birds. Birds love to Run The Spiral instead of flying to another perch. Spiral allows cardinals grosbeaks and other desirable large songbirds to feed. With normal perch tube feeders these birds have difficulty feeding without a seed tray. Lifetime warranty on workmanship and normal wear and tear. Aluminum and stainless steel parts. Squirrelproof patented locking lid just twist and lock those pesky varmints out. Easy to clean twist and clean (patent pending) easyclean bottom comes completely off for easy cleaning. No screws to mess with. Easy to hang looped wire hanging cable included (150 lb test) and attached. Holds cap so you don t have to wonder where you put it. Feeders come completely assembled (in beautiful open view box.) Take out of the box hang in your yard and watch how fast the birds are attracted to the patented Spiral Perch. |
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17 Inch Spiral Whole Peanut Feeder Yellow $35.75 Spiral Whole Peanut Feeder Yellow 17 in. Consumers birds LOVE patented BirdQuest Spiral Feeders More ports means more birds. Birds love to Run The Spiral instead of flying to another perch. Spiral allows cardinals grosbeaks and other desirable large songbirds to feed. With normal perch tube feeders these birds have difficulty feeding without a seed tray. Lifetime warranty on workmanship and normal wear and tear. Aluminum and stainless steel parts. Squirrelproof patented locking lid just twist and lock those pesky varmints out. Easy to clean twist and clean (patent pending) easyclean bottom comes completely off for easy cleaning. No screws to mess with. Easy to hang looped wire hanging cable included (150 lb test) and attached. Holds cap so you don t have to wonder where you put it. Feeders come completely assembled (in beautiful open view box.) Take out of the box hang in your yard and watch how fast the birds are attracted to the patented Spiral Perch. |
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18 Inch Super Spiral Sunflower Feeder / Twirl A Squirrel Combo $90.94 Birds love BirdQuest spiral feeders. More ports means more birds.Birds love to run the spiral instead of flying to another perch. Spiral allows cardinals grosbeaks and other desirable large songbirds to feed. With normal perch tube feeders these birds have difficulty feeding without a seed tray. Aluminum and stainless steel parts. Squirrelproof patented locking lid just twist and lock those pesky varmints out. Easy to clean twist and clean bottom comes completely off for easy cleaning. No screws to mess with. Holds cap so you don t have to wonder where you put it. Feeders come completely assembled (in beautiful open view box). Take out of the box hang in your yard and watch how fast the birds are attracted to the patented spiral perch. Holds approximately 3 quarts of seed. Includes: TwirlASquirrel quart Spiral Sunflower Feeder. |
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17 Inch Copper Spiral Thistle Feeder $39.46 17 in. Copper Thistle Spiral Feeder. Consumers birds LOVE patented BirdQuest Spiral Feeders More ports means more birds. Birds love to Run The Spiral instead of flying to another perch. Lifetime warranty on workmanship and normal wear and tear. Aluminum and stainless steel parts. Squirrelproof patented locking lid just twist and lock those pesky varmints out. Easy to clean twist and clean (patent pending) easyclean bottom comes completely off for easy cleaning. This allows you to fill from the top one time and the bottom the next. This means seed never gets old or moldy. That equals more finches at all the ports. Also makes cleaning a snap. No screws to mess with. Easy to hang looped wire hanging cable included (150 lb test) and attached. Holds cap so you don t have to wonder where you put it. |
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17 Inch Metal Spiral Finch Tube Feeder $35.75 17 in. Aluminum Thistle Spiral Feeder. Consumers birds LOVE patented BirdQuest Spiral Feeders More ports means more birds. Birds love to Run The Spiral instead of flying to another perch. Lifetime warranty on workmanship and normal wear and tear. Aluminum and stainless steel parts. Squirrelproof patented locking lid just twist and lock those pesky varmints out. Easy to clean twist and clean (patent pending) easyclean bottom comes completely off for easy cleaning. This allows you to fill from the top one time and the bottom the next. This means seed never gets old or moldy. That equals more finches at all the ports. Also makes cleaning a snap. No screws to mess with. Easy to hang looped wire hanging cable included (150 lb test) and attached. Holds cap so you don t have to wonder where you put it. |
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17 Inch Elegant Spiral Thistle Feeder $35.75 Elegant 17 in Black Thistle Spiral Feeder. Consumers birds LOVE patented BirdQuest Spiral Feeders More ports means more birds. Birds love to Run The Spiral instead of flying to another perch. Lifetime warranty on workmanship and normal wear and tear. Aluminum and stainless steel parts. Squirrelproof patented locking lid just twist and lock those pesky varmints out. Easy to clean twist and clean (patent pending) easyclean bottom comes completely off for easy cleaning. This allows you to fill from the top one time and the bottom the next. This means seed never gets old or moldy. That equals more finches at all the ports. Also makes cleaning a snap. No screws to mess with. Easy to hang looped wire hanging cable included (150 lb test) and attached. Holds cap so you don t have to wonder where you put it. |
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